If I wasn't so good at talking to animals, if the crocodile wasn't
so nice, if I wasn't so lucky, then I wouldn't be alive right now. I was on
holiday when I saw a rope swing across a river. I thought “what fun!” and without thinking I swung on it. The rope
snapped! I fell into the river. I hadn't realized it was a crocodile infested
river so I started to panic. The crocodile silently sneaked towards me and was just about to eat me when I begged him not
to ruin my holiday. Amazingly he let me escape.
Well done I think yours is good because it is different. Others have said they got hurt by the croc but you didn't. Great story but I would like to see more puntuation.
ReplyDeleteGreat If, If, If, Then sentence.
ReplyDeleteFunny story using the 'if, if, if' to start
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