I start to sprint and go faster
Something paints my fate
making the road I continue to follow.
I am wandering along a track
I don't know where it's going
Yet I follow it anyway
Curiously I follow.
I am wandering along an avenue
Wondering along the way
I do not question
I simply imagine
Inquisitively I follow.
I wandered down the path
I got to a dead end
I realised I must choose another route
So I raced backward
Now I retrace my foot steps
So I may find the highway to happiness.
'YES' PHOEBE ! What a master-stroke of poetic magic!
ReplyDeleteThis is my favourite stanza...
I am wandering along an avenue
Wondering along the way
I do not question
I simply imagine
Inquisitively I follow.
The self reflection is brilliant from the characters point of view.
Well done you
MR W
I think that it is really good :)
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