Malvern Wells Class 4 Blog : The cloud 100 word challenge

Thursday, 16 April 2015

The Cloud

I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,

I will never follow the crowd,

I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,

I am never very loud,

You may not like my sight,

But you will never know where I`ll have my next flight,

I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,

I will rain when there is a fire,

I will do as I say and be no lair,

I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,

The wind blows one way I go another,

I will never crowd together,

I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,

I am a cloud made of more.

Anonymous16 April 2015 at 12:48
I like the 'The wind goes one way, I go another' bit alot. :-) Very Clever. You only need to work on poetical
timing, that's all - and the spelling of 'liar' . Well done!!
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Anonymous18 April 2015 at 02:06
I like the way you repeat I am no ordinary cloud.
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Anonymous19 April 2015 at 01:26
I agree with Audrey, the way you repeat I am no ordinary cloud keeps me interested in the poem.
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