Stanley had
been living in a box all his life. Since he could remember his life had been
planned out for him…from the school he went to, the clothes he wore, the job he
succeeded, and even the person he married. Everyone thought how happy and
successful Stanley was. But it was a smokescreen. Underneath it all, Stanley
yearned to escape his designed life. So each night he booked into the flying
hotel and become someone else in a dreamscape, from soldier to sportsman to
politician. For those few hours everything changed…and then one morning he decided
to just…check out.
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Interesting piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a brilliant piece of writing because of the way it is very gripping and I never wanted it to end. You could have used some speech somewhere in the writing to make it more interactive.
ReplyDeleteThe ending to this writing is brilliant, because it makes you laugh but also think... why didn't he
ReplyDeletejust leave before? Great , imaginitive piece of writing.