Sunday, 18 January 2015



DEAD

Petrified, exhausted, breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible, for the dread his might be the end.

I ran, and ran, running, running for my life. Crashing, and carelessly, sprinting away. For I was looking, looking for home. Smartly they furiously bounded behind me. “Give it up we’ll catch you” one of them shouted. Suddenly it dawned on me I could not get home district 12 had been destroyed. How could I survive? Angrily I stopped and looked around there a pistol on the floor I picked it up, and fired bang,  bang, bang, bang and bang DEAD! YES!         
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 January 2015 at 11:13

    I WORKED REALLY HARD ON THIS SORRY ITS LATE

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  2. Anonymous22 January 2015 at 02:38


    I like the title of it. You have used really amazing words.

    from Holly from the Wyche school.

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  3. Anonymous4 February 2015 at 12:50

    Wow, how dramatic. I wouldn't won't to be the people who were getting shot! It may have taken long to do, but it was worth it, I like where you got the pistol from and the ending. Challenge: you could give out more information on the surroundings and describe a bit more, maybe!
    Poppy😊 from Suckley School

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