Monday, 9 December 2013

100 Word Challenge Evie Read

The archway stood there shrouded in the cloud of the dark night. I felt my brothers small hand slip into mine and he put his dainty head onto my shoulder. Jamie was scared, no, petrified. As was I; but Jamie lacked confidence, he had lacked it since the age of five and it had affected family plans. We walked towards the archway, slowly with deliberate steps. As we did so, the cloud of fog started to form into a hooded figure, Charlie squeezed my hand; I felt his fear. A face had formed and a terrible shriek filled the air. And then the noise stopped...

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