Monday, 9 December 2013

Laura 100 word challenge The Crystal Mirror





Jack Frost and his servant sprinted into the room with Santa waddling  behind. "Quick, behind this shiny easel, Mr big Belly wont see us here!" Whispered Jack Frost. Santa pushed Jack Frost into the easel with his servant  falling behind him. "Wow that must be The Crystal Mirror! But still, Jack shouldn't be killing my servants!" Exclaimed Santa. Santa picked up the paint and gave it to his Mum to put in the cuboard for later. "Wow Santa you did a good thing there"said Santa's  Mum. "All in a days work Mum!" said Santa very happily.

2 comments:

  1. that's really good a good use of vocab. i like the way u based it on santa

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  2. i find it funny that in your story Santa has a mum

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