Wednesday 22 January 2014

100 WORD CHALLENGE!

I was playing football with my best friend Derek. We were in the garden and I by mistake kicked the ball into this shed. I had never seen this shed before so we went to look in the shed but as fast as lightning the shed sucked us in, it took us into this candy land it had lakes full of melted chocolate and candy trees with toffee apples hanging on and there were candy floss clouds  but suddenly we got sucked back out it was outlandish!

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  1. Anonymous23 January 2014 at 09:36

    This is really good James. It makes me want to go and find this shed.

    By Peter

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  2. Anonymous23 January 2014 at 10:58

    James, the inside of your shed sounds fantastic! Your story reminds me of Charlie and the Chocolate factory. Is this where you got your inspiration from? Jenny Hartland

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    1. James24 January 2014 at 10:54

      Thank you! I did get my inspiration from Charlie and the Chocolate factory!
      James Taylor

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