I finally made it home! It had taken me three and a half
weeks to get across the garden and into the dry of the shed. I kept tripping
over the long grass and falling into muddy puddles. Sometimes I even lost my
direction, especially at night. If this happened I had to stop and wait till
the morning so that I could see the shed again and go in that direction. I was exhausted
after the long journey and relived to have reached the shed in safety without
being eaten. After all, I am only a little green caterpillar!
Peter - A quality piece of writing which has really caught my imagination! What a thoughtful way to hook the reader in with the main details of the story being hidden! WOW WOW WOW - Keep it up young man!
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Loved your piece of writing especially the fact that you were a caterpillar. by Lorna (Tia's mum)
ReplyDeleteI loved your piece of writing Peter I think it is very clever and imaginative!
ReplyDeleteI loved this incredible journey! - Ali (Darcey's mum)
ReplyDeleteHe's a very determined little caterpillar who got where he wanted to go! I loved it Peter.
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