Monday 27 January 2014

105 words - by phoebe

Chimpanzee got into his pink limo and drove off. His chauffeur always pointed out less wealthy people for him, and this time, to start off with they went past a cycling Gorilla.
"Look sir," giggled the spider monkey. "Sixth left window."
Chimpanzee turned and laughed evily. The Gorilla shook his fist and cycled off on his bike.
A few minutes later, another similar Gorilla drove past in a grand car. Every where Chimpanzee looked there were Gorillas, more and more Gorillas!
He looked out of the window to see the first cycling Gorilla who said ; " Family can not be bought with money, you know."

3 comments:

  1. it could not be weirder - my mind is not quite in full spin, it seems.

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  2. Well done Pheobe. I can really tell that you have taken your time on this piece of writing! MJ

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  3. really good, I can tell you've thought about what you want to write!

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