Mr Whiskers was in his office, brushing his moustache, when he heard some disgraceful noise in the classroom next door. He stormed into the classroom, wielding his cane ferociously and roared "QUIET!"
The children were so scared it went completely silent, you could have heard a pin drop. Suddenly Billy shouted "We have no teacher." "Boy! Come here "Mr Whiskers hissed as he dragged Billy, by the ear, out of the classroom and gave him four lashings of the cane for his cheek. The children heard Billy screaming; when he returned to the room his cheek was swollen and bleeding....
Congratulations Phoebe on your first ever 100WC! And what a start it is! Superb vocabulary choices and excellent punctuation choices.
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Mr Warne
That is funny!!! Isaac at the Wyche school
ReplyDeleteWhat a good story!! Elliot from the Wyche CE primary school
ReplyDeletethat is so good Phoebe
ReplyDeleteIt's really good I want to hear more.
ReplyDeleteVery good story telling
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