Thursday, 30 January 2014

The Grand Green Gorilla

There was a little girl called Katie and she had a pink bicycle,she cycled every day to school.The lesson had ended and it was time for break,everyone was laughing all apart from Katie,she was just standing in the middle of the playground staring at something in the distance coming closer and closer by the second and soon there was silence.There was a grand green gorilla,he came right up to Katie,opened his big mouth wide open and.......AHHHHH,Katie woke up with a pain in her head and sweating,then she realised that it was all a scary dream.   
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  1. Anonymous30 January 2014 at 11:36

    Tension... Alliteration ... What more could a teacher want from a piece of writing!

    Well done May, I can see you are really improving with each challenge! Keep up the hard work as I am really proud of your effort and thought that goes into each piece!

    Mr W

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  2. Anonymous2 February 2014 at 03:54

    I'm so glad it was only a dream! I like this imaginative piece May, well done! Ali Chambers.

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