...but all we could see
was water...
...the swell of
saltwater smashed the ship sideways. The angry sea unleashed rage like a crazed whirling dervish. Waves towered skywards as this
black demon unrepentantly displayed her malice and violence. Damn this
schizophrenic mistress! Calm, gentle and serene one moment,
terrifying but inspiring the next. "If I live until tomorrow, I
swear by the heavens above that this will be the most accursed
experience of my life!", screamed Skipper Jack. The densely dark
rolling clouds swallowed any remaining hope like an ominously
closing final curtain call. Raindrops pinged off the deck as Neptune
fired machine gun-style at defenceless victims...
Congratulations John - an exceptional piece of descriptive writing. I especially enjoyed the personification of the storm! Very effective indeed! You are officially the first person in Class 4 to receive this accolade, CONGRATULATIONS - Lets see what visitors to our site think?
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WOAH. Dramatic? Or is there a stronger word to use?
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