If the crocodile hadn’t escaped from
the zoo, if I hadn’t have been on a school trip, if I hadn’t have gone first on
the swing rope, then I wouldn’t be in the crocodiles stomach.
It was a nice sunny day to go on a
school trip to the lake and I wanted to go first on the new swing rope.
I grabbed the rope and swung out like
Tarzan.
Suddenly, the crocodile jumped up out
of the water and gobbled my leg
and the rest of my body followed.
Unexpectedly, I was in the stomach with
my PE teacher. How did he get here?
Very funny Adam maybe you should add a bit more adjectives. Oliver
ReplyDeletei liked it but on the pictuer it was a man
ReplyDeleteI like your 100 Adam it is very funny and grips the reader.
ReplyDeleteOllie cooke
A fantastic addition to the scary Crocodile series! I think this 100 word challenge is brilliant. I must try it when I start writing my new picture book...
ReplyDeleteChris Judge
very funny Adam like the idea of the PE teacher.
ReplyDeleteI like it because it was all your fault!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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