Wednesday, 7 May 2014

100 word challenge by John Davies

Suddenly, Mr Warne turned a deeper shade of red and steam could be seen from his ears...


2-0! Great Malvern striker Dylan, took a shot and scored a spectacular goal. At that moment all the Malvern Wells players' heads dropped. However, Malvern Wells still had some fight in them. 2-1! Ben Leah headed the ball into the net from Dan's delivery. Dan dribbled past all the defenders and tapped the ball into the goal past a diving keeper. 2-3! Finn drilled the ball through the keeper's legs only to score. The more happy Mr Warne was the more he cried tears of joy. This was the most unthinkable victory ever.



                                       by John Davies

1 comment:

  1. great use of the more more sentence, you make it really interesting good discripshon

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