Tuesday 9 September 2014

ollie cooke's 100 word challenge


Mr. Something (yes that’s his real name) was angry, very angry. Nobody had come to school. Tomorrow he would cane them all one by one. But for now he would just have to teach the chairs about drawing apples. “You there why have you not drawn your apple”, the chair did not reply. “GET HERE TO BE CANED” screamed Mr. Something. He walked over to the chair and started hitting it with his cane. By the end of the day Mr. Something was so furious that he had pulled out most of his hair. His chairs were being very naughty.

3 comments:

  1. Ha Ha - fantastic imagination - I can picture this as well!
    Excellent use of brackets to add more information to the sentence.
    Well done Ollie

    Mr Warne

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  2. Well done Ollie, your writing was really humorous. I can really picure this in my head. AMAZING!!!!!!!!

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  3. well done, it was very funny!

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