Tuesday 7 October 2014

Tentacle boy


I was in hospital with a broken leg feeling bored when suddenly a boy was wheeled in. He looked normal until I looked down and realised he had a phone attached to his wrist in the strangest way ever! Tentacles had sprouted out of the phone and entwining themselves around him. The more he wriggled the more tentacles flowed around his arm. The frightening thing wasn’t the tentacles, it was the screen - it had eyes and a mouth! Suddenly they disappeared and the boy’s eyes opened. I screamed. They were the same colour as the eyes on the phone!


Oliver Cripps

1 comment:

  1. Oh, dear. I just know I'm going to get nightmares now! That was the most gripping 100 words I've read - well done! It could have maybe benefited from a couple of commas but it was brilliant

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