I picked up paddy with my mouth and flung him on to Dora , the pony, I glared at the calendar. It was Halloween !!!
Putting my hoof on the hoof scanner in a secret corner of the stable, a staircase opened before us!!!!As we plodded up , the dog,crossed Dora's back and jumped onto a chest , which sprang open to reveal a gold in-liner with a microphone poking out .(just to let you know the dog went 'splat' against the wall and, stupified ,mystified and confused, fell onto the marshmallow monster....as it shivered they got their ghost-busting machinery out !!
(I, Ranger, am actually a pony for this story)
by HATTIE!
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Hattie - I love the line
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Very clever indeed. A good range of punctuation included just remember only one exclamation mark needed!
Very creative indeed Hattie - Mr Warne
liked it Hattie liked the way you used some of your pets names.
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