On the night of Halloween all the monsters
were out in Halloween Town. Noticing the door to the human world open the
monsters staggered, limped and hunched into the other realm. The monsters saw
all the dressed up children; spiders; bats; black cats and much more, they got
scared, frightened and terrified. A slimy green blob slid out of the doorway; seeing
a bunch of trick or treaters, it trembled, quivered and shivered in fright. As
it shivered they laughed “Fantastic costume, it looks so real.” It replied “It
is real, I’m a monster” – the children screamed and ran away.
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This is a really imaginative and descriptive piece of writing Phoebe - excellent use of the sentence type highlighted to draw the reader in.
ReplyDeleteThis line is really impressive: "it trembled, quivered and shivered in fright."
You have taken your time and really selected words which would have key impact upon the reader!
Mr Warne
Well done I love your use so vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteLiked it the way the children said that it was a great costume then when the monster said it was real they screamed and ran away.
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