Tuesday, 13 January 2015

TᕼE Eᑎᗪ Oᖴ ᑕᕼOᑕOᒪᗩTE!

 'Breaking news "Chocoholics will be disappointed to hear; due to a shortage of coco beans, there is believed to be only one bar of chocolate left in England." I started to run, if our shop had the last bar of chocolate in England then I must be the one to get it! Petrified, exhausted, breathless, I ran as fast as humanly possible for dread that this might be the end of ᑕᕼOᑕOᒪᗩTE!  I reached the shop in record time, I was in luck, there it was, a family bar of Dairy Milk, I grabbed it, paid quickly and sprinted home!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 January 2015 at 02:38

    Amelia from the Wyche
    That was really good it would be quite bad if there was no more chocolate. You could maybe use different sentence starters.

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  2. Anonymous22 January 2015 at 02:39

    Amy from the Wyche Primary School

    This is really good well done. :)

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  3. Anonymous22 January 2015 at 02:41

    Paddy from the Wyche

    No not the end of chocolate 😟😟😟. Great story

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  4. Anonymous28 January 2015 at 03:57

    Very gripping story I won't live with out chocolate it wound be terrible if there was no chocolate

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  5. Anonymous29 January 2015 at 04:09

    Oh no only one bar of chocolate left in England what are we going to do????? I hope you save that bar for life!!!!! Then thinking about it, it would go moldy.Hope there isn't one bar of chocolate left in England . I would want to get it and eat it .but i cant leave school early to get that dairy milk family size of chocolate. Good story.Like your sentence that is underlined .Could you make that into a ed sentence.

    Alice and Hester
    Suckley School

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