BREAKING NEWS!!!!
“Hello I am
here to tell you the news and today, we have got the weather report and all of
that rubbish but today I have got something to tell you. Out of the ordinary,
something to get worked up about, also very
inspirational. There has been a case where a cloud has detached from the main
cloud like it had a mind of its own.
The cloud came from the sea…..
He was not
like other clouds,
The wind did
not command him…
You see
he wasn’t just a cloud…
He was a
cloud made of more.
A clever way of starting this news based report Hope. I liked the way you built up the tension in your writing. Not sure a news reporter would get away with that first line though!
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you cooperated the words from the video into your own work. :)
ReplyDeleteA clever way of starting this news based report Hope. I also liked the way you incorporated the words from the video into your own work. :)
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