Thursday 20 March 2014

Dan and Tilly's 100 word challenge

The more Jimmy, the cat, climbed, the more scared Rachel became. “MUM!” Rachel shouted “Jimmys stuck up the tree!”
“Oh dear me!” she muttered “I’ll call the rescue centre.”  She drew out her mobile, with a sigh. Then I came outside. “Whats going on?” I asked
“look up, can you see Jimmy?”
“Who doesn’t!”
Jimmy was up in the tree, Rachel was crying, mum was in a panic, it was a depicted scene from the circus. I saw the flashing lights.
“Finally.” mum said said with a relief . I heard the sound of a car door slam.
“Wait a minute.” said Rachel “Thats not Jimmy!”


Mr Warne let us have 105 if we put depicted.

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