Tuesday 11 November 2014

By Harley's Mum


A twinge niggled at the back of Jake's neck, then started to slither slowly down his back gathering pace as it neared the end of his spine. Inky fear spread, oozing through veins like poison until everything in Jake's body was screaming red alert, wake up! 
Jake's bloodshot eyes cracked open, something was wrong, the floor seemed to be shifting, swaying unstable. Logic advised him to get to the window, to find an explanation, but that unstoppable little voice whispering in the back of his head knew his world had suddenly changed forever, he had left earth for the last time.

2 comments:

  1. Imaginative piece of work.

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  2. its really descriptive and dramatic

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