Thursday 16 April 2015

The cloud 100 word challenge

The Cloud
I am a cloud  no ordinary cloud,
I will never follow the crowd,
I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,
I am never very loud,
You may not like my sight,
But you will never know where I`ll have my next flight,
I am a cloud  no ordinary cloud,
I will rain when there is a fire,
I will do as I say and be no lair,
I am a cloud  no ordinary cloud,
The wind blows one way I go another,
I will never crowd together,
I am a cloud no ordinary cloud,
I am a cloud made of more.







3 comments:

  1. I like the 'The wind goes one way, I go another' bit alot. :-) Very Clever. You only need to work on poetical
    timing, that's all - and the spelling of 'liar' . Well done!!

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  2. I like the way you repeat I am no ordinary cloud.

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  3. I agree with Audrey, the way you repeat I am no ordinary cloud keeps me interested in the poem.

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