Friday, 6 December 2013

100 word challenge Ben Scott

my story of the war
chapeter one
It all started when my dad was puting me to bed when we suddenly heard the air raid shelter it's like a table but just metal. And me and my sister have bunk bed. my Mum and Dad have two separate beds in the Morrison shelter.sometimes they would let me and my sister go in there beds with them and then the noise stopped.In the morning Dad went out of the air raid shelter to check the raid was over.

by ben.s


1 comment:

  1. CHECK SPELLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! USE CAPITALS!!!!!!!!!!!!

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