Wednesday, 4 December 2013

100 Word Challenge by Vicky Aynsworth


It was a cold night, and I was snuggled in my bed fast asleep when I woke up to the sound of the siren. I was scared, yet exited. We (my Mum, Dad, sister, and me) ran down the garden and into to the Anderson shelter, it was dark and dusky down there but I still felt warm and safe. I could hear our next door neighbours baby crying, I then suddenly remembered this isn’t something to laugh about. I was listening to the baby crying, and then the noise stopped I knew my neighbours were dead; I fell to the floor and wept bitterly.        
by Vicky Aynsworth

3 comments:

  1. Vicky - I really like the use of brackets to add that extra detail! Well done for linking the challenge to our topic WW2

    Mr W

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  2. Vicky very good work well done :)

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