Joe was walking down the school corridor when he heard a noise; he looked around and saw it was coming from locker 45. It was a mixture of crashing clattering and banging. It was excruciatingly loud and he could see the door rattling on its hinges. He edged slowly towards the locker and suddenly a dark, spindly creature leaped from it. It had a long bloodsucking mouth and a spiky tail. It emitted a loud whine that seemed to be drilling into his skull. It was reaching for his throat! Quickly he scrambled out of reach, slammed the door shut and then the noise stopped.
by Ollie Cripps
What a superb start to our 100 word Challenge Ollie! Great vocal choices to draw the reader in - top work!
ReplyDeleteMr Warne
Great story Oliver!!!
ReplyDeleteabsolutely fantastic Mr Cripps!
ReplyDeleteI'm scared by that!! Well done, it's epic. I'm pretty sure it would make a good horror movie :-()
ReplyDelete