Thursday 23 January 2014

Ben's 100 word challenge

“There it is” Exclaimed Pete

“What’s where” answered Jim Then right before their eyes there was a rat, a fat rat. The boys had their clubs at the ready. “CHARGE” shouted Pete they ran off chasing this rat, The rat was scurrying around the house then suddenly the rat turned right, into the garden through a crack in the shed the boys were following, well attempting to keep up with the rat. The boy’s walked into the shed and in the shed; which no one uses was a swimming pool invested with rats so Pete and Jim ran off home.    

1 comment:

  1. Well done Ben it is really funny and it has got lots of good vocab:)

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