Monday, 13 January 2014

                                       100  word challenge Laura


"Help!!"Shouted Darren. The boomerang had hit him in the face.Darren looked around the room to see who threw it but nobody was there.The boomerang seemed to have a mind of its own.Darren ran out of the room and bumped into his older brother Ryan.Ryan casually said"what's up!"Darren stayed silent as a embarrassing feeling ran into his body.Darren ran into his room and hid under the bed. There was the boomerang. The boomerang said"I only 
want to be your friend!!!!" From that day on Darren and the boomerang were best friends.
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  1. Anonymous13 January 2014 at 13:29

    A great way to start your writing Laura and this certainly grips the reader!

    This is my favourite line: as a embarrassing feeling ran into his body.

    A superb effort Laura - I really think your writing is improving with every 100 word challenge !

    Mr W

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  2. Anonymous16 January 2014 at 08:57

    A great 100 word challenge you used great adjective :)

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  3. Anonymous20 January 2014 at 11:22

    great imagination, well done. Helen Prior

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