Tillys 100 word challenge
“Ready or not, here I come” came a bellowing voice. “But
where can I hide? Aghhhh…” Panic attack! I heard rustling; Bert coming to find
me. I quickly rushed into the scruffy shed. The second I walked in I knew it
was a mistake but I had to face a few tiny mice, otherwise I’d be the all-time
loser of hide and seek. I tried to control my breathing whilst Bert’s muffled
cries carried on outside. Crouching down I felt something bony and round, way
too hard for a football. I picked it up and gaped at an eyeless shape.
We love the pace of this writing, we felt we were in the shed with you! x :-) Ali and Darcey
ReplyDeleteThis was breathless, I was swept along with the action. Great. Miles Chambers
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