Wednesday, 9 April 2014

The Castle

The 'trip of our dreams' was turning out to be one of our worst nightmares.We arrived at the creepy castle at midnight.Realising that only part of the castle was inhabitable,we approached the door,knocking,we went inside,the door creaked open revealing a dark,gloomy unlit hallway.We spotted a big,spiral staircase leading to our room.I held my breath when we got to the top,dreading the room would be filled with spiders and musty smells that filled your lungs until they were ready to give up.Opening the door I realised we weren't alone…

1 comment:

  1. Love the tension you have built up around this piece May! Top writing

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