Sunday 28 September 2014

Olllie's Live and Blogging

Ollie's 100WC



If I hadn’t gone on this trip, if I hadn’t gone on this ride, if I hadn’t got up this morning then I wouldn’t be halfway across a lake dangling a metre above a crocodile’s mouth! I hang on tightly as the crocodile eyes me from the water below. I feel cold water splash my feet as the crocodile rears up, snapping at my toes. The rope I’m holding judders and I think in despair that it is snapping! Then I realize that the rangers are pulling me in! Looking down I see a look of disappointment on the monster’s face.

Ollie Cri
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 September 2014 at 08:49

    I like the fact that you included the crocodile's feelings about the fact that you were rescued.

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  2. Anonymous29 September 2014 at 09:33

    Well done Ollie good use of punctuation you are a good author keep it up!

    Oscar

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  3. Anonymous4 October 2014 at 07:11

    I like your if if if then

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