Sunday 14 September 2014

Peter's 100WC

I went to bed after a normal day at school in 2014. I woke up the next morning in the Victoria era! As I ate my bread and jam for breakfast I tried to work out what was happening. I was relly confused. I had to walk 2 miles to school there wasn’t a car in sight. No library, no supermarket, no petrol station and worst of all no swimming pool! There was just a little groccery shop with sacks of potatoes outside. As I aproched the school gates I saw a tall and fierce looking man. Mr Stakehouse, the headmaster!!!
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  1. Anonymous16 September 2014 at 06:56

    Peter - I am pleased to announce you are our first WRITER OF THE WEEK!
    Great engagement of the reader and a really clever way of keeping the reader guessing!

    Keep up the fabulous effort you are displaying in class and with your out of school tasks !

    Mr Warne

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  2. Anonymous17 September 2014 at 06:49

    Wow that is a really good story well done!! I wish I was in Victorian era. Elliot at the Wyche ce primary school

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  3. Anonymous17 September 2014 at 06:53

    Very good story!!! Isaac at the Wyche CE primary school

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  4. Anonymous29 September 2014 at 09:56

    good work but mabey you shold put in were you tired when you got to school

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  5. Anonymous29 September 2014 at 10:27

    i really like the way that you when to bed normally and woke inthe victoran times

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  6. Anonymous30 September 2014 at 12:26

    I love how you were more worried about their being no swimming pools rather than how you would get home

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