Imagine a place where the blazing sun just caught a beautiful tan on your skin, where the lake was so calm and peaceful, where there are no crocodiles or sharks: At leaf-field north France this was the complete opposite of that.
In the misty and dull morning I got up early to go to have a quick relax on the rope swing, it was that moment when the crocodile tried to snap me into its terrifying jaws.If I Hadn't of held onto that rope, if I hadn't of tried to jump off then i wouldn't be writing this story.
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A like the way you set the scene about being on holiday
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used a mix of vocabulary in your piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteI like where you have set it out instead of just a river
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