Tuesday, 13 January 2015

Ollie Cooke's 100 word challenge



Yesterday I came out of my room already dressed and suddenly I started running down the stairs faster than I’d ever done before and THUMP! THUMP! THUMP! something was coming after me. Taller than a giraffe and it’s hair as wild as a lion’s mane, it chased after me, out the door and down the street. I didn’t dare look back in fear that the sight might paralyse me forever. Petrified, exhausted, breathless I ran as fast as humanly possible for dread that this might be the end. The previous day I’d stolen my sister’s iphone and she wasn’t happy…

1 comment:

  1. This is a very comical piece of writing and I love your description. You missed a comma at the start but other than that I love it.

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