Tuesday, 4 February 2014

George 100 word challenge

But all I could see was water

Blue, brightly dazzling in the sun,

Utterly still,

Apples are ripe,
Lemons bright,
Lush fruits;

I could picture it. 

Clouds out of sight,
Oh what a delight!
Under the sun,
Don’t you worry

See the wind whistle,
Enable to enjoy yourself,
Even if it’s for a second.

What an experience,
After all it’s beautiful,
So calm and peaceful;

What more could you want?
An opportunity that doesn’t go by every day,
Tomorrow I would like to do this all over again and again,
Every day I would love to come,
Really that’s all you expect of the beach.


  1. WOW!!! Thats is amazing George! That is one of the best poems I have ever read. I love all the descriptive words! James Taylor

  2. thats some amazing work George I love it!!!

  3. A very clever and imaginative way of approaching this challenge George, love it!


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