Friday, 6 December 2013

100 Word Challenge Tilly Sheppard

When we moved house we found that it came with a cat called Harvey. Harvey is a cheeky tabby cat with shiny eyes like big green gob stoppers and ears that, whenever you touch them, they twitch like there is a wasp buzzing in his ear. One morning I came into the kitchen to a ghastly noise. It sounded like a demented toddler breathing in helium. I saw Harvey at the kitchen door, wailing and staring with his big green eyes at another cat outside. When I opened the door the screeching and hissing got franticly loud. Then he pounced and then the noise stopped.  

By Tilly Sheppard

5 comments:

  1. hi tilly
    that is a really good piece of work you've used punchuation really well and the story really draws you in it was great!

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  2. WOW Tilly that is a great piece of description I can practicaly see Harvey in front of me!

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  3. Nice story I liked the description ;p

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