I
was exhausted: I had been in my garage creating an awesome time machine! I wanted
to go back to the time of the dinosaurs. My epic machine was done. So Bob and I
jumped in and travelled back to the dinosaurs. POP! We were there. Look up! Can
you see that huge flying thing! Above us there was a pterodactyl. We thought it
was going to eat us so we ran and ran but as we ran we fell over, I bellowed
Bob get up. But it was too late the giant pterodactyl had captured us! I don’t
want to die Bob whispered nervously….
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A great opener to this collaborative piece of writing! I wonder if you could describe the time machine in a little more detail as painting a picture for the reader is so important?
ReplyDeleteA cliffhanger as well to finish - very gripping indeed.
How did you accomplish this collaborative piece?
Mr W