Hannah sat on the window sill of the lighthouse. Tall pines of the national park stood behind
it, dripping with water from the drizzle that was falling. In front of her a
calm, rippling sea was spread out like a table cloth. Hannah pulled her anorak
over her knees and tucked some loose hairs into her hood, and wrote in her
book.
Imagine a place where
cliffs and forests met, a place just like in those fairy tales, a place where
the sound of raindrops is liked: this is the story of that place.
It sounded like a good start.
What a stunning opener Phoebe! This could well be your best yet...
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