Thursday, 20 March 2014

The miracle night sky

The miracle night sky
If it had never happened, If I had never seen it, if it wasnt there,  then I would never feel like I am feeling now!
It was the most beautiful sight I had ever seen in my whole life, I looked up and saw
a rainbow fire, shooting past my eyes, as it whizzed through the sky.
I was about to run inside and tell my mum, but on 2nd thoughts I decided to keep it my little secret. Now every night before I go to bed I run outside to catch it whizzing by.


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 March 2014 at 12:24

    Writing of the week for this gripping descriptive piece! Well done girls - an excellent effort woking together as a group of three! Excellent Alan Peat sentence starter!

    Mr Warne

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  2. Anonymous13 June 2014 at 03:58

    I really like your idea to the story. Also great if, if, if, then sentence at the start. Rhys, Wyche school

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