Tuesday, 8 April 2014

Lauras 100 word challenge

100 word challenge

The noisy coach stopped and I ran out in exitment. I stood at the door waiting for my mum and dad but then found them trailing behind pulling the whole families suitcases, and also my large sleeping sister. My cheeky two brothers sprinted inside but then fell silent within one look of a terrible grumpy man that was standing by the counter. Keeping our heads down me and siblings went to our old and damp bedroom thinking that this place wasn't going to be the hotel we were wishing about,and that the 'luxury' hotel wasn't anything but our own terrible nightmares.

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