Crocodile
Attack!
If
the rope had held, if the crocodile had not been ravenous, if I had
been less tasty, then I would not be living in a saltwater
crocodile's tummy now! You know the worse thing? I miss Mum and Dad.
It's
kind of boring living in here! We just swim around, sleep and eat
something every six months. But I have a plan! The croc has not
digested me yet and I think I can make myself rather
unpalatable.Think bitter, think wriggle, think sour, think burp! I
transmit my thoughts. URRGGHH! He spat me out! I am free!
John -this one made me laugh out loud!
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of the more the more sentence to really engage the reader.
A really impressive piece of writing - Keep it up!
Mr Warne
i really like the picture
ReplyDeletelove it!!!!!:-]
ReplyDeletevery funny john I like your word choice and your if if if then sentence.
ReplyDeleteOllie cooke
Great work.
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