Monday, 8 September 2014

Hattie 100 word challange

I entered the classroom for the first time. I saw a ginormous scary man who had, big booming eyes, a dastardly long cane, a curly moustache,  a big black hat with a gold tassel and last but not least a squeaky mouse voice! Mr Warne was frightening until he opened is mouth. When he spoke the children found it so funny but had to hide their grins as all hundred children did not want to get the cane. Unfortunately a small boy named Bob could not resist laughing, Mr Warne pointed his cane on the end of his nose......

1 comment:

  1. Hattie, you have certainly got off to a flyer with this 100 word challenge! Superb description and vocabulary choice! Shame about my squeaky voice ruining the really intimidating atmosphere!

    Great work - keep it up!

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