Wednesday 10 September 2014

Mr Moustacheo 100 wword challenge Laura




There stood Mr Mustachio. Right in front of me. His face was bright red and hot steam came bursting out his ears. Smelly sweat was dripping off his curly mustache onto my face as i held a lemon sherbert in my hand. The other children were staring at me as Mr Mustachio raised his wooden cane to my face and shouted "WHAT IS THAT IN YOUR HAND"! I tired to hide the sweet in my coat pocket but he struck my arm in fury. I screamed and the lemon sherbert flew through the air and landed perfectly in the teachers fuming mouth.

1 comment:

  1. A gripping short story which really engages the reader Laura
    You are a very important person so always use a capital I !

    Mr W

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