If I did not go to the theme park, if I had
listened to my mum, if the skipping rope did not snap, then I would not be
screaming, “help!” It all started when we went to the theme park gift shop and I
saw the skipping rope. I couldn’t resist it, so I begged mum for it until she gave
in. Once Mum had bought it I couldn’t wait to use it so I run over to a nearby
tree next to the river. I had
swung the rope over the tree and jumped onto it, then it snapped!
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Really good story but maybe you could relate it more to the picture. It's quite exiting and I love your idea
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I think it's really good because it grips the reader wanting to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, I like the surprise at the end!
ReplyDeletehattie
I love your idea of the skipping rope
ReplyDeleteI liked the story and the 'if, if, if' start to it but maybe you could have mentioned the crocodile.
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