Tuesday, 4 November 2014

Ollie Cooke's 100 word challenge



“What’s that through the trees, over there” Dave said nervously. As they got closer Steve realised what it was. “It‘s a pig” he exclaimed, and as it shivered they realised it was cold and hungry. It must have been abandoned. Who could abandon a pig? Scared, alarmed and shattered, the pig let out a squeal as if to say ‘take me home’. So that’s what they did they did. Dave and Steve got the pig into the car and it became their pet. They decided to call him Bob. After their incident with the pig, Dave and Steve became vegetarians!

1 comment:

  1. Wow Ollie what a story although you could have been more imaginative with your characters especially their names. Keep up the excellent work
    Ari

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