Wednesday, 5 November 2014

The cosiest Christmas story ever - Phoebe's 102 word challenge

It was a freezing Christmas Eve, and it had snowed - Evie was looking forward to her first white Christmas. She trudged along through the crisp snow, tiny snowflakes tickling her eyelashes and floating up her nostrils. A bird used her wings to shelter her chicks, and as it shivered they nestled close. Evie unlocked the door and wiped her feet, before flinging her coat off and slumping on the sofa.
She opened the final little door on her Christmas calendar and popped the silky milky chocolate in her mouth. Christmas had begun.

1 comment:

  1. WOW, Phoebe, that was awesome, I loved your use of description. It really painted a picture in my mind. Fantastic. Ella

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