But when I put the batteries in it
I opened my present. My eyes lit up
with pure joy and happiness. My parents had got it! The machine, the chocolate bar machine.
It could produce any bars in the world! My favourite had to be a Twirl but
when I put the batteries in to my surprise it spoke to me! Wonderful, I didn't have
to do any tapping on buttons. Instead, when I came home from school it simply asked what chocolate I would like. What a machine, it even had a
passcode so no one could steal any of my chocolate bars! But then it broke…
BY GEORGE
great use of metaphors...
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