Thursday, 9 January 2014

Ollie Cooke 100 word challenge


Once I was looking on the internet when I found a "make your own bomb kit". I brought it but when it arrived I realised that I didn't have most of the stuff. When my dad went out I raided his garage for some phosphorous, lead, plutonium and finally batteries. I followed the complicated instructions very carefully and after about two days of building I did it, but when I put the batteries in it the countdown started. I rushed into the back garden but it was to late. NOOO! I thought I was going to die. three, two, one...

2 comments:

  1. I really like this and it's really funny.

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  2. Wow! Suspenseful writing, Ollie. I hope it ended okay. I guess, since you're posting this, that it did!

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