Thursday, 9 January 2014

Ben's 100 word challenge

                                                           
                                                               The Bully 

But then I put the batteries in. The plane was flying, Landing it almost could do anything it was the best Christmas present ever. Until one day this mean boy called Andrew came along and snapped the wings off the plane. Poor Burt ran of crying. For years Burt has been trying to get revenge on Andrew, so on Burt’s birthday he was going to ask for the updated plane which has guns and does not need batteries. One day Burt met Andrew in the park and his plane flew up and started to shoot. But Andrew got up and broke Bert’s brand new plane

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